Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Saturday, 13-May-2006 12:45:49

Good lil girl always done what's she's told.
Never broke a rule or ever bold. All eyes look at her with admiration.
The day she dies all her secrets are told as wings wrap around her to take her. wings dark, ice cold as they squeeze out her soul

Post 2 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Saturday, 13-May-2006 13:43:58

short poem, but good. I like the immage.

Post 3 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Saturday, 13-May-2006 15:01:41

I agree with HauntedReverie
. I get a feeling of a life wasted from this poem, is that right?